The other titleless story Discussion!

It's actually a very good story, Wins. I'm not sure why you don't make up a working title and change it as needed (that's how I go about things--I'm working on one Story that's gone from being called "Enter the Story" to "Laura" to "The Meaning of Friendship," and I think it'll probably change again by the time it's done), but that's just a suggestion. Aside from little quibbling things like that, you've really got an intriguing premise. I can't wait to see where you go from here.

Jessica is a very interesting character... I get the impression that she's not going to be able to hide her nature entirely, but that just makes her all the more exciting to read about. It's a very, very fun thing.