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Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:30 pm

What do you guys think of my stories, like the ones here? Constructive Criticism is appreciated.

Also if you'd like to appear in the fic, just ask and I'll add you somewhere.:3


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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Flaw of Insanity on Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:50 pm

<3 Kiwi reference. Pretty good so far, I can't wait for more.

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:54 pm

Kiwi is one of my IRL friends who sometimes plays AQW. Working on Chapter 2 now.

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Valosity on Sat Feb 06, 2010 11:37 pm

It's quite good! But you have a typo to let you know:
Off course there’s only so much one can cook on a campfire and

Supposed to be "Of".
Anyways, I can't think of much that isn't perfect! I only have seen typos pretty much... or puncuation missing:
“Yeah I’m looking for an oven.”

You forgot the comma there, right after the "Yeah" it should be "Yeah,"...
“Anything in particular that you’d like.""

Should be "“Anything in particular that you’d like?" not without the question mark.

Well, that's all! Hope you have a good chapter 2, there's really nothing not good about it!


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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:40 am

Thanks for pointing those out Valosity. Just went back to correct them.

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Valosity on Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:25 am

No problem, thier the only thing I could find wrong in the whole thing...


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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:39 pm

Second Chapter's posted... thoughts?

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Crystal Lion on Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:11 pm

Actually getting it in to my house required a bit of work


Should be
Actually getting it into my house required a bit of work


“I haven’t found a couch to suit.
I think you should add something after 'suit', the sentence feels rather incomplete.

I liked the part where you blackmailed Vesper about the Guru Forest incident. Made me laugh to myself.

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Vampiric on Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:14 pm

Nice story! I'm quite enjoying the story so far and how you've incorporated the different places in Lore and tied them in. You've made me curious about the Guru Forest incident though... will that be revealed in the future or must we speculate endlessly?

I also liked the second chapter because of the interaction between the friends. Makes the story more amusing ;)

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:05 pm

I'm thinking of adding the Guru Forest Incident as a side story between later chapters. In the meantime you'll have to speculate :3

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:38 pm

Just posted a possible scene for my original fiction story. Clicky!!

Not sure whether I'll post chapter 3 of "The Great Cookie War", the "Guru Forest Incident" side story, or the first chapter of my Mechquest fanfic next.

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Sat Jul 10, 2010 4:31 pm

New chapter for the Great Cookie War is posted... Have a look see!

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:13 pm

Posted the first chapter of the Mechquest fic.

Wouldn't mind some constructive criticism.

I'll slowly start posting my literature to dA. Just not at the moment. Because it's after 11pm. Yeah.

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

Post by Altera on Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:46 pm

Posted the first chapter of a new Dragonfable fic. Thoughts? CCs? Bananafish?

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Re: Stories from the Nightside discussion

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