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After Chaos: Stories by Wixmagic Discussion/Comments
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After Chaos: Stories by Wixmagic Discussion/Comments
by Wixmagic on Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:26 am
I changed the name of my word gallery, and added the story WIP Cybernetic Crusade. At the 'suggestion' of Pere I made this thread.
Please tell me what you think about my stories.
Any and all CC is appreciated
Please tell me what you think about my stories.
Any and all CC is appreciated
Wixmagic- KuKuKuKuKu
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Re: After Chaos: Stories by Wixmagic Discussion/Comments
by Peregrine on Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:03 am
Not bad. Not bad at all. I think you should work on punctuation though. Comma and paragraph use especially. The storytelling would be a lot more effective if your formatting was a bit more refined.
[The Strange Adventures of Unimaginatively Named Characters]
Peregrine Falcon, reborn from the ashes.
The blue ashes.
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