Once You Have Been Lost Discussion

by **Juliana** on Mon Jan 17, 2011 3:40 pm

Yes, it is half past three in the morning as I write this. I couldn't sleep, so I wrote this. Please don't ask where the title came from, but I'd like to know anything else about what you think. I will probably continue this.

by Weena on Tue Jan 18, 2011 2:05 pm

Awesome! Immaculate detail, it just grabbed me from the start, I simply love the depth put into the plot, the mysteriousness of it all, the characters, everything. More than enough detail to make it look much more refined than your average second grade show-and-tell narrative, but not too much as to bore you.

I cannot wait for more!

by **Aeonarial** on Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:28 pm

The elements in this are accurate and realistic. It captures not only the eye, but also the heart. It is both touching and sad, and it makes you wonder more about the characters getting you to want to know what their lives have been like.

Once You Have Been Lost Discussion

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