TR Noir - Freaks Discussion

by Mrsebi on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:50 am

The place to discuss my new sci-fi noir detective story! have at it!
http://www.trforums.com/t2829-tr-noir-freaks#99517

by Altera on Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:11 pm

It's pretty cool! Look forward to reading more!

Though there are a few grammatical errors, some lines of dialogue need capitalisation, a couple of missing apostrophes, easy enough to fix up.

by Mrsebi on Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:25 pm

thanks, although for now, I just wanna focus on getting the story out, its an idea ive been having for a while: if it goes well, I might even try to add in more detail and make it a full novel, then publish. (Id change most of the names obviously)

by Crystal Lion on Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:40 pm

Well, why do you think I make a villain?

by **Juliana** on Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:55 am

If it's okay with Mr. Author, I'll be happy to edit for grammar and conventions while the story's in progress.

by Mrsebi on Thu Mar 10, 2011 4:33 pm

That would be wonderful, thank you ^_^

by Chiyuki on Fri Sep 23, 2011 7:08 pm

I just finished reading what you have posted up so far and I think it's fantastic! You have a real way with words! I like the blend of LA Noire and TR very much! It is very amusing xD. I hope you write more soon. You story is a very engaging and enjoyable read.

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