The Riveting Tales of Unimaginatively Named Characters.

Didn't you make a discussion thread because you are afraid of comments? Too bad, I'll comment this anyway.

Let's see. So you basically stole a bunch of Pere's ideas and jokes and actually managed to make them not funny. Then you put them in a "story" about what I can only assume to be a bunch of Nukia people dealing with random stuff. And not the funny kind of random, just the random and seen-before kind. Oh and you got a brown nose from Anna's butt a few times in this story, which seemed a bit desperate to me.

So all in all, and I'm not going to sugarcoat, this story was horrible. There was neither an interesting story nor funny jokes, which means there is no reason to read this at all.

I really hope you now proceed to tell me that your intention was to make this story as horrible as possible to act as some kind of ironic counterpart to Pere's stories. and that it will never get a second chapter.

I'll be honest too, it wasn't really funny, especially because we don't know the characters.