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The Titleless Story

Post by Winnie on Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:11 am

Here you can talk about the Story I am writing.

Anyone wanna suggest a name?


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Post by Juliana on Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:46 am

I love it, Winnie, and I think it's beautiful.

Why not call it "Love You Forever"? Or "Christmas in Time"? Or maybe "Into His World"?

You know, your writing is suddenly a lot more professional. Almost all of the little distracting mistakes that I'm so used to finding from you are suddenly gone, and the result is every bit as good as a lot of published books I've read. In fact, this is the first story posted in this board to affect me the same way that a truly world-class book does. I can't stop thinking about it... I can't stop dreaming about it... It's even interfering with my ability to drive, which in this circumstance is very high praise... I want to read more!

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Post by Winnie on Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:50 pm

Gee, thanks! Please do not read my story while driving, however, becuase you may crash..

I am rather frusterated with writing right now, becuase you can spend weeks on character development, finding a song for inspiration, looking for a character or person to lightly base him off of, and actaully drawing him out, not to mention attempting to write him and name him appropreatley, and you can show a finely drawing and inked picture of him to you sister and she will ask why Mark Cohen is on the cover of my book. And after you kindly explain to her that that is Jason, who isn't anything like Mark, you suddenly realise that they have the same personality, timidness, and skin tone, not to mention striped scarf. After that you assume that she'll forget about it, however she then shows it to your mother, who is an avid Rent fan, and she asks the same question that Amara does. After you give the explanation, you suddenly remember that you have company, and they are all looking at you carrying a white binder with Amara and your mother laughing. Hard. Later, Amara brings it up again, and again, and again. Since I can't change him, I have decided that I'll just live with it and hope the next character I make won't be based directly off of a broadway character that you're whole family has seen.

Dang you kayleen, for deciding that the scarf should be black and white striped.

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Post by Juliana on Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:40 am

Oh, I can see how that would be frustrating. :trxp:

Seriously, it doesn't even matter. I've had something similar happen plenty of times, although for me it's more along the lines of "Okay, I've got this perfect original character who just sprung out of nowhere as if he/she had always been in my story... Wait, I know that personality. This is Anakin Skywalker!"

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Post by Winnie on Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:50 am

Yes, but it is 10x worse than that! It's the appearance, personality, and his brother has the same name as the actor that play's Mark's brother!

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Post by Juliana on Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:52 am

Okay, you win. It's frustrating. But, seriously... YOU CALLED HIM "ADAM!!!!" (Was that on purpose, just to make me freak out, or have you, um, forgotten?)

Whichever one is, is funny.

But I do like what you've done with the next two chapters.

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Post by Winnie on Thu Aug 20, 2009 8:12 am

What, I like the name Adam!

Actually, it was a refernce to Anthony Rapp's real life brother, Adam Rapp. He's a writer.

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Post by Juliana on Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:31 am

Jason goes from being about thirteen to his final age in about three seconds? That was fast.

But I like this new chapter, though the one before it experiences a brief resurgence of... characteristic typos.


.:Post Merge- Bad Juli! You double posted! (lol)


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...You've got your title.

"Shattered Time."

It's beautiful. The story is beautiful, and the poem is amazing. I think you've really surpassed yourself; this is a piece of truly worthwhile literature.

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Post by Winnie on Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:22 am

NEW CHAPTER!

Sorry it took so long, but I finally got the next chaptah!

You can take a look into Jason's past this week, and hopefully not get creeped out...

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Post by Juliana on Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:32 am

Aww, cute! Jason's an animal lover... and I sure don't blame him for wanting to run away. Are there even any adults at that place? (On second thought, don't answer that. I really don't want to know.)

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Post by Winnie on Sun Aug 30, 2009 5:05 am

Ok, ok. I won't say...


And yeah, Jason loves animals. I may even make him make somthing that lets him talk to them!


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Post by Banned on Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:31 pm

You should go with No.3 Name just my oppinion hope you can come up with a name.

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Post by Cial on Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:30 pm

Anything but the last one *shudder*

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Post by Ryzaa on Tue Sep 01, 2009 3:10 pm

Juli's idea on the storyname is good.. definately fits.. Awesome story so far Winz, keep it up ;D

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Post by Juliana on Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:30 am

I love your new chapter of the story, Wins. "Even he knew that you didn't organise food by color." (By the way, is there some reason that you're consistently using the British spelling of the word "organize"?) Just one issue: You said that "Jason was not confused for two reasons," then gave two reasons as to why he was confused. Mebbe you should fix that. And, seriously, why on earth IS the food organized by color?

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