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Chatter Bones Discussion
by Chiyuki on Sat Sep 26, 2009 8:28 am
Just in case someone has read my new story Chatter Bones, I was hoping to get feedback and opinions on the first chapter. I'm currently working on the second chapter and I'm open to any comments or critisism.
Thanks ^^
Thanks ^^
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Lord Zombie on Mon Sep 28, 2009 9:26 pm
Well just a minor note....you sorta misspelled Zorback I'm pretty sure it's Zorbak instead..as for the story itself it's nice..but it's too soon to judge it really, seeing how things will probably change as far the writing style goes..or at least I assume it will probably happen..so until you make more chapters to judge as a whole.. I'll reserve any real judgement on it..
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Banned on Mon Sep 28, 2009 9:45 pm
Its good... so far im kinda reading it right now :P
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Erik on Tue Sep 29, 2009 4:16 am
Yes LiZ, it is Zorbak, the tiny moglin necromancer :P
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Flaw of Insanity on Tue Sep 29, 2009 5:00 am
Chi... amazing.
You used amazing imagery to describe the bar...
You made it seem realistic (for a AQW story)
And it is put together amazingly.
Keep it up, or else...
You used amazing imagery to describe the bar...
You made it seem realistic (for a AQW story)
And it is put together amazingly.
Keep it up, or else...
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Banned on Tue Sep 29, 2009 6:50 am
Im pretty much done with writing... but its good to see excellent writers like yourself in this clan.
And of course Charon... even though he logged off before i could get his picture and i had to spend 2 hours finding someone with vampire and enough money to look like Charon but thats besides the point.
And of course Charon... even though he logged off before i could get his picture and i had to spend 2 hours finding someone with vampire and enough money to look like Charon but thats besides the point.
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Chiyuki on Tue Sep 29, 2009 9:59 pm
wow guys thanks! thanks zman for the spelling correction too. I'll fix that right away.
I'm hoping to put chapter two up either today or on the weekend.
I'm hoping to put chapter two up either today or on the weekend.
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Chiyuki on Thu Oct 08, 2009 7:01 am
Chapter Two is up and Chapter Three is a work in progress!
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Lord Zombie on Thu Oct 08, 2009 11:46 am
Wow that's quite the improvement from Chapter 1...very nice work...look forward to the chapters to come..and what becomes of the demonic warrior..
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Chiyuki on Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:33 am
chapter three's almost done...just finishing up the the editing
I should be posting it up soon
I should be posting it up soon
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Re: Chatter Bones Discussion
by Chiyuki on Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:54 am
okay sorry about not posting anything for awhile
I haven't been on in ages because school is eating my life :(
*is sad*
but I will be done with final exams this week so I shouldn't have any reason not to be online then
and hopefully I can get the next couple of chapters up on here
though I doubt anyone was bothering to read this....well I'll post up anyway
so sorry for the absence
I haven't been on in ages because school is eating my life :(
*is sad*
but I will be done with final exams this week so I shouldn't have any reason not to be online then
and hopefully I can get the next couple of chapters up on here
though I doubt anyone was bothering to read this....well I'll post up anyway
so sorry for the absence
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