Re: Discuss the tales of the one who write the stories included in the thread titled Copyrights and Crowbars, in 3D

Cial · by Cial on Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:38 am

Awesome!

I'd love to be in a few!

**Shadow** · by **Shadow** on Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:50 pm

Felix called shotgun alright.

Felix · by Felix on Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:09 pm

You could say that.

Bram · by Bram on Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:35 am

Started a new series, Void Journal, in which I will explain my absence from the online world during the next school year RP style.

Link... Wait for it... Wait for it... HERE!

Bram · by Bram on Sun Aug 01, 2010 2:00 am

Managed to find some time to write a second Void Journal entry.

**Juliana** · by **Juliana** on Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:24 am

Wow, Bram, that's impressive. I admire your creativity, all the more given its source of inspiration, and I look forward to whatever you write next.

Bram · by Bram on Sat Aug 21, 2010 1:20 pm

@Juli: Thanks. c:

Because I haven't update this thread in a while, here's a list of new things:

- Third Void Journal Entry

- Minor Void Journal Entry

- ToDo List

Bram · by Bram on Thu Aug 26, 2010 6:14 am

Finally finished entry 4!

Weena · by Weena on Fri Aug 27, 2010 3:45 pm

Ossimsauce. That stuff is gold. Gogogogogogo.

SSJ4 Gohan · by SSJ4 Gohan on Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:50 pm

This should be in a book :)

Peregrine · by Peregrine on Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:28 pm

You asked for some CC, so here it is. Albeit stylishly late.

Pretty good story. I note that you're explaining a lot of the back story after getting into it. I was going to comment on how I was barely following it but now I guess I can't since you only started off without a massive post full of exposition to get people hooked.

One major thing I dislike about your writing style is that you don't use paragraphs during the bold green sections. Blocks of text aren't pretty, Bram. I'd suggest spacing it out a little. You should start a new paragraph every time someone speaks, or at least that's how I learned it.

Bram · by Bram on Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:39 pm

@Weena, Gohan: Thanks. :D

@Pere: I've been trying to do that, but not many people are speaking right now. And yea, indentation would be a good idea... Thanks. :D

I forgot to mention that the fourth Void Journal entry marks the end of that series... And starts the Void War trilogy. Void War: Book One, Episode One, Part One will be posted as soon as I can get it written. I'll mostly be a lot of introduction and explanation, but it should have enough to keep readers interested... And later episodes will have lots of explosions.

Felix · by Felix on Sat Aug 28, 2010 4:58 am

EXPLOSIONS! I wanna make things go boom.

~kthxbai

P.S. Your writing is so epic its not funny..